Pay more attention to your lineweights in your plan, as the trees (the smaller circles?) are the same lineweight as the lawn, giving the impression that the lawn is the same height as these trees. Trees are usually marked as large circles with an ‘x’ or lighter circle at the trunk.
Your diagrams are very clear and super compelling! I love the hand sketches, they really give each interpretation a clear lens as to what you are trying to accomplish. The Iannis 9 pm square threw me off for a second do to the differences in text and the apperance of the grid, but I really appreciate your diagramming of temperature!
Pay more attention to your lineweights in your plan, as the trees (the smaller circles?) are the same lineweight as the lawn, giving the impression that the lawn is the same height as these trees. Trees are usually marked as large circles with an ‘x’ or lighter circle at the trunk.
Your diagrams are very clear and super compelling! I love the hand sketches, they really give each interpretation a clear lens as to what you are trying to accomplish. The Iannis 9 pm square threw me off for a second do to the differences in text and the apperance of the grid, but I really appreciate your diagramming of temperature!
Keep up the good work