Great use of lineweights to express hierarchy. The Agnes Denis style diagram seems really interesting to me. Why such elongated lines? Could smaller segments express temperature equally?
The plan is has nice legibility. Could benefit from a little bit more differentiation.
Great use of lineweights to express hierarchy. The Agnes Denis style diagram seems really interesting to me. Why such elongated lines? Could smaller segments express temperature equally?
The plan is has nice legibility. Could benefit from a little bit more differentiation.