please dont upload pdf. Nice drawing. Lineweight is a bit too agressive, the thickness of the overall outline is almost 3-4 thicker than the dash. Consider toning the dash to grey. Layout could be improved with alignment a better text hierarchy. Also, please make 2D and export drawing on consistent view. The sections look like they were taken in perspective – also need better lineweight.
please dont upload pdf. Nice drawing. Lineweight is a bit too agressive, the thickness of the overall outline is almost 3-4 thicker than the dash. Consider toning the dash to grey. Layout could be improved with alignment a better text hierarchy. Also, please make 2D and export drawing on consistent view. The sections look like they were taken in perspective – also need better lineweight.