Nice attempt. The view of the drawing may not be the best view a lot is being obscured or distorted. If you notice you will see the vertical line are converging due to the perspective distortion. This would lead to some confusion about original intention. One can’t tell really if the wall is tilted or distorted by perspective. Lineweight could be better, I reccomend greying the dash line and thinner, then you can make the dash a bit denser to clarify it line definition. Sections needs lineweight or poche, I can’t really tell which part is cut. The font is too regal for the drawing and is distracting.
Nice attempt. The view of the drawing may not be the best view a lot is being obscured or distorted. If you notice you will see the vertical line are converging due to the perspective distortion. This would lead to some confusion about original intention. One can’t tell really if the wall is tilted or distorted by perspective. Lineweight could be better, I reccomend greying the dash line and thinner, then you can make the dash a bit denser to clarify it line definition. Sections needs lineweight or poche, I can’t really tell which part is cut. The font is too regal for the drawing and is distracting.