The geometries you created look so cool!! The use of yellow and your line weights allow the reader to easily tell what is going on and appreciate the design decisions you made. However, I would crop out the portions of your silhouettes that wouldn’t be seen. So for the Move – Companionship, the right most silhouette would be cropped so the body doesn’t intersect with the linework any further.
The linewegihts being used to show where the change is, esp. in the delete row, are very confusing.
The geometries you created look so cool!! The use of yellow and your line weights allow the reader to easily tell what is going on and appreciate the design decisions you made. However, I would crop out the portions of your silhouettes that wouldn’t be seen. So for the Move – Companionship, the right most silhouette would be cropped so the body doesn’t intersect with the linework any further.
The linewegihts being used to show where the change is, esp. in the delete row, are very confusing.
Nice work!