This seems like it went right to a third degree diagram without establishing the rules in the first two degrees. Make sure you establish grounding for the spaces you are making. Next, I would say the first two degrees would share what this diagram is about and what you are plotting. There is an interesting moment in the top left where the unit exists outside of the enclosure, how does that lead to a really distinct condition in the actual building?
This seems like it went right to a third degree diagram without establishing the rules in the first two degrees. Make sure you establish grounding for the spaces you are making. Next, I would say the first two degrees would share what this diagram is about and what you are plotting. There is an interesting moment in the top left where the unit exists outside of the enclosure, how does that lead to a really distinct condition in the actual building?