Yachi_Noah_exercise_1.2
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Is there a consistent logic to how the poster is laid out? (e.g font hierarchy, location of title text, alignment…etc)
Title may be to big for the poster yet does not convey any form of narrative rather than to say bluntly the word “ANTS” it sounds like it desperately need an exclamation point to add some interest….
There is an almost consistent color scheme – but the way it is use to key in a narrative is not fully explored.
The bottom right diagram is a good start — think about the edge forms by different images as the actual transition of season – otherwise these edges are quite confusing. The diagram need something to quantify the process – why is the thickness of the segment decease?