Hi Sage,
Nice work! Your diagrams of percentages of roles in the hive and bee lifespan are very clear. However, I wonder if the lifespan circle diagram and the hatching time diagram could be combined. I like the comparison of honey production and pollen levels, but again, could be plotted on the same graph. I’m not entirely sure what the migration diagram and the map are meant to be showing – give more visual weight to either the most important or best executed aspects of your projects. In general, do not title presentations by assignment number. If you were showing this in person, “time-based diagrams of bees” would draw much more interest than “assignment 1.2”.
In the future, do try to have a rough draft of your project by Thursday; that way I can give better holistic feedback and help you have a more polished final project. Overall nice work – this looks good.
Hi Sage,
Nice work! Your diagrams of percentages of roles in the hive and bee lifespan are very clear. However, I wonder if the lifespan circle diagram and the hatching time diagram could be combined. I like the comparison of honey production and pollen levels, but again, could be plotted on the same graph. I’m not entirely sure what the migration diagram and the map are meant to be showing – give more visual weight to either the most important or best executed aspects of your projects. In general, do not title presentations by assignment number. If you were showing this in person, “time-based diagrams of bees” would draw much more interest than “assignment 1.2”.
In the future, do try to have a rough draft of your project by Thursday; that way I can give better holistic feedback and help you have a more polished final project. Overall nice work – this looks good.