There is a lot of really good information on this! Some of it needs to be more clearly explained, like the deaths diagram at the top. If you add a legend of what each color means, that would help.
Remember to keep the same attention to linework when you start adding graphics. The lines should be able to tell the story with the graphics playing a supporting role.
There is a lot of really good information on this! Some of it needs to be more clearly explained, like the deaths diagram at the top. If you add a legend of what each color means, that would help.
Remember to keep the same attention to linework when you start adding graphics. The lines should be able to tell the story with the graphics playing a supporting role.