One general layout design aspect is to set it up so that it does not distract viewer from the contents:
Pay attention to the way you layout the diagram and place the diagram title. Is there a general rule or logic (alignment). If there isn’t a clear logic (e.g all title text aligned on the left under the diagram) then there isn’t a consistency establish would thus force viewers to ransack around to find infomation.
Take a look at the variety of line weight – if you haven’t noticed by now a filled block is also considered as a line weight – it is very thick. This draws out a significant jump in the system, and very often renders all other lines invisible in comparison.
Content wise: The ant border does not add anything to the infomation rather acting as a distraction.
Key title does not tell you anything specific about the narrative. It is question if there is a narrative at all…
The diagram about pheromone trail is good in extracting the system, but could further be expand. It may need accompanying text.
One general layout design aspect is to set it up so that it does not distract viewer from the contents:
Pay attention to the way you layout the diagram and place the diagram title. Is there a general rule or logic (alignment). If there isn’t a clear logic (e.g all title text aligned on the left under the diagram) then there isn’t a consistency establish would thus force viewers to ransack around to find infomation.
Take a look at the variety of line weight – if you haven’t noticed by now a filled block is also considered as a line weight – it is very thick. This draws out a significant jump in the system, and very often renders all other lines invisible in comparison.
Content wise: The ant border does not add anything to the infomation rather acting as a distraction.
Key title does not tell you anything specific about the narrative. It is question if there is a narrative at all…
The diagram about pheromone trail is good in extracting the system, but could further be expand. It may need accompanying text.