Hi Ryan,
Please control your colors and line weights – I appreciate the heavier emphasis on the path of migration, but please use a plain line. No background is usually best, the cyan is too bright and is distracting, and I’m not sure what the gray box is adding. Be mindful of contrast – it is hard to see the size comparison chart and the text in the migration pattern diagram.
I feel like the map and the migration pattern diagram could be combined into one, which might be easier to read. Right now, I’m not sure what the size of the circles is showing, or exactly what the arrows mean. This looks like the peloton diagram, but unlike the pelotons, I’m not sure position within a small group is what you’re trying to show here.
In the future, have a rough draft by Thursday so I can review the whole composition and hopefully give more meaningful feedback before you have to turn it in.
Hi Ryan,
Please control your colors and line weights – I appreciate the heavier emphasis on the path of migration, but please use a plain line. No background is usually best, the cyan is too bright and is distracting, and I’m not sure what the gray box is adding. Be mindful of contrast – it is hard to see the size comparison chart and the text in the migration pattern diagram.
I feel like the map and the migration pattern diagram could be combined into one, which might be easier to read. Right now, I’m not sure what the size of the circles is showing, or exactly what the arrows mean. This looks like the peloton diagram, but unlike the pelotons, I’m not sure position within a small group is what you’re trying to show here.
In the future, have a rough draft by Thursday so I can review the whole composition and hopefully give more meaningful feedback before you have to turn it in.