Your image is pixelated and makes the lines look very fuzzy, and almost hand drawn.
I would play more with lineweights, following what you did in your Noise diagrams. I really liked that you made a clear difference in lighting in your diagrams! It was neat to see the differences in them.
For the plan, a good rule of thumb is to make sure labels don’t overlap with other lines.
Your image is pixelated and makes the lines look very fuzzy, and almost hand drawn.
I would play more with lineweights, following what you did in your Noise diagrams. I really liked that you made a clear difference in lighting in your diagrams! It was neat to see the differences in them.
For the plan, a good rule of thumb is to make sure labels don’t overlap with other lines.
Great work! Keep it up