AndrewGirod

This week, we have been working on our second proposal draft.  The feedback we got on the first one was eye-opening.  Our organization was terrible and we had a lot of extra words and sentences that we didn’t need.  We cut out everything we could find that was not important and elaborated on our stronger points.  As we worked, I tried to encourage others to participate and to keep our group’s ideas related to the overall theme of our project.  After all of these weeks working together, we have become a much more efficient and effective team.