I found Viramontes’ use of imagery in her novel, Under the Feet of Jesus, very effective and beautiful. The reader is able to internalize the idea she’s presenting with vision and reflection, rather than just understanding the words. On page 70, Estrella and Alejo are newly acquainted and are starting to like each other. There’s an awkward silence between them, at which point Estrella doesn’t know how to express herself. Instead of stating it with a common phrase, like ‘she didn’t know how to carry on the conversation’, Viramontes writes, “she didn’t know how to build the house of words she could invite him into”. The image is very fitting since shelter means so much to people with so little materials, and an invitation into her home is much more meaningful and personal than the more generic summary of what was taking place… i.e. she didn’t know what to say. The novel is loaded with engaging imagery. It seems effortless and natural the way she’s able to use the technique effectively, even with topics you may never have thought you wanted imagery applied to. Like when the guard-dog scratches himself with his hind leg, “his purple testicles shaking like coin purses” (pg 114). Disgusting… but awesome imagery!
I was interested in how the name Perfecto was attached to the man Petra and Estrella meet in the store when Petra is rummaging for fresh garlic. It comes up when the man tells the proprietor he finished his repair job, and the proprietor says, “Perfecto!” not in addressing the man, but by indicating his satisfaction with the work (pg 112). He then gets referred to as Perfecto by the narration of the novel. One can assume this identification is through Petra’s perspective, which got me wondering about Perfecto Flores’ role in her life. The word ‘perfect’ is not a traditional name, but an abstract idea, which lends to Perfecto’s portrayal as less of a living person, and more of an interchangeable foil. The Perfecto in the store parallels the original Perfecto by also having a red tool chest. They’re both repair men, or utility men, and utility is what Perfecto represents for the family, and the story.