Josh Rosenthal Final Review Board Opt-1ggyoen
Zipper Space:
Your favorite park is in danger. The park that you played in while growing up. The park that you had your first date in. The park that has been the site of picnics, family reunions, and celebrations. A developer has fenced off the park to turn into a private housing complex and you will never be able to use the site again. In the future, more parks around cities are going to suffer a similar fate. The cause: diminishing urban lands. Due to population increases and a higher need for housing, more public lands will be turned over for private development, making parkland a rarity in the center of the city.
The solution to this problem is to bring the public space back into the city in the form of a vertical park. This park would be surrounded by community spaces and flexible, high-density apartments to make the most use of the land.
The form of this tower will be iconic, an emblem of the movement to bring land back to the city and an attraction to draw people in. The form is split in half with a park running up the center, which has been termed the zipper. The form of the tower undulates in response to the wind, opening in some segments for wind turbines while becoming more closed in other segments to shelter the park. The southern face of the building has a double skin façade serving as a form of insulation for the tower. A shading device that responds to solar radiation covers the double skin façade. The tower is also designed to treat three types of water to become potable: rain, grey, and runoff. Rainwater is captured and filtered on the roof. Greywater is captured from the apartment units and then treated by running through a thick, hanging vegetation. Runoff water from the western hills is treated through horizontal basins creating a marsh on the ground plane of the tower.
The tower is approached through a plaza on the northwest side to draw people in from the Aerial Tram and streetcar. The hardscape of the plaza transforms into the marsh as it nears the Willamette River while passing under a large entrance canopy termed the apron. From here, the park is entered as a tributary of this marsh. The park is grounded by a grand staircase which leads up to the many levels. Throughout, fields can be used for playing, hills can be used as seats, and circular benches can be used for meeting. A scissor stair connects the park leading to mezzanines where the stairs meet which act as socialization spaces. The park is located primarily on the south side of the while community spaces are placed on the north for views of Downtown Portland. The units are accessed via elevator cores on either side of the zipper. They are highly flexible and can be combined in multiple ways. Each unit contains a small private garden for relaxation at the end of the day.
Most useful review comments:
Narrow your focus to only one thing and really push it: For example, Michael successfully did this with carbon and brought it to the full extent that it can possibly go. For me, I would have been able to further develop the park if I had focused entirely on it. I plan to do this in the time between now and the competition deadline in order to further nail down the concept
Make sure that your presentation is as clear as possible: For me, I still was not able to iron out my poster to the best arrangement possible. I also did not have the best verbal presentation, which may have been hard to follow at points. The main points should be clearly highlighted with the others more removed.
What I Learned:
A good graphic arrangement is key to making the presentation. My arrangement is currently too muddled and needs to be fixed again before submission.
A convincing presentation will also make or break your project. I still need to work on my presentation skills, which will hopefully be ironed out either through summer internships or through subsequent reviews.
Adjustments:
I will have more time now to further develop the park using even more precedents and also through the comments that the reviewers gave me. I would like to have a section render of the park going up the center of the page like a zipper that will have even more variation than what was there before but still using the same interventions and architectural principles. I would also like a clear visualization of the base condition of the park as that is also important. I will likely rotate the canopy render so that you can see the base through the entrance. Wind turbines will still interrupt the park as I like the idea and it adds to the form. This segmentation adds an interesting element to the tower making it so that each park space can have a unique character. For example, one segment can be the Japanese inspired garden, one segment can be the English inspired garden, and one segment can be the modern/futuristic garden. Another possibility is that each segment can become its own attraction with a unique centerpiece visible from the ground so that people will continue up the tower.
