After the review, I found that I needed to make the urban redesign of the Lloyd District more compelling, in order to even get critiqued on my building design.  Thus as my next steps, I need to figure out how to integrate nature and the city better.  I now have the idea of creating these green corridor paths that connect all the way from Sullivan’s Gulch to Holladay Park, which go through my site.  These green corridors will undulate and people can walk on them with the reason being that it will connect the park to a new bike path located by the train in Sullivan’s Gulch.  The purpose of of integrating this system is to show an alternative way of living, where people are a part of nature, living a healthier lifestyle, and still a part of a city.