Final Review Comments (Zhongyang Huang)

Final Review Comments (Zhongyang Huang)

More further designs are made based on the actual streetscape and are closely linked with the actual site A more logical, systematic visualization of map…

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Final Comments_ Franco Melanie

Final Comments_ Franco Melanie

List 3 comments from the reviewers that you aim to revise as a group. Fix render so that it matches the rest of the presentations/diagrams…

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Final Review Comments

Final Review Comments

List 3 comments from the reviewers that you aim to revise as a group. Show more data and results of the metrics Visually display the…

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08B Final Review comments

08B Final Review comments

Group Revisions: Simplification of elements: Our intervention was overpopulated with design elements; we need to allow our site to breathe. Unification of elements: Our transverse…

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08B Final Review Comments

08B Final Review Comments

Group Revisions 01: A simplification of elements. A common theme across our comments was reducing the fabric in between larger elements so that they are…

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08B Final Review Comments

As a group: We plan to revise our methods for module selection as it relates to our circle diagram and data collected in the area…

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08B Final Review Comments

08B Final Review Comments

Superilla Cuitadora Group Comments: Integrate three spheres of self care, public care, and community care into final design proposal as defined by data collected. Refine…

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08B Final Review Comments

08B Final Review Comments

As a group: Some of the major things that were critiqued was the scientific process that we took. Some of the definitions of the indicators…

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08B Final Review Comments Lawrie

08B Final Review Comments Lawrie

Group Revisions Relating to Cynthia and Gabino’s comments on data. clearly presenting findings from data collection and sticking to a scientific method of making a…

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08B Final Review Comments

08B Final Review Comments

Group: 1. I hope to use feedback on our overall design to revise this design as a group. During the review (and before the review,…

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