08B_Barajas-Silva

As a group, three comments that would be important for us to revise are as follow:

1. Specify how we are implementing water into our design, as it was not clear in the presentation
2. Tie things together in order to solidify our statement and what we are arguing
3. Show examples of how the street is designed in the present, as the reviewers would like to see if our design intervention is a positive or negative move. 

Individually, based on the reviewers’ critique, I would like to focus on two things:

1. Our rendering and how I can use examples from “Europan” to help solidify our rendering
2. Label hotspots on the plan so that our design interventions are easier to argue.