08B Final Review comments

Group Revisions:

Simplification of elements: Our intervention was overpopulated with design elements; we need to allow our site to breathe.

Unification of elements: Our transverse logic was not clear in the organization of the elements on site. Developing unifying elements such as paving, and the drainage system is a priority.

Clarity of elements: Our concept was not easy to follow for the reviewers, we did not connect our primary issues of social cohesion with water and ecology.

Individual revisions:

(most important) Water reclamation development: Although our project focused on water, our graphics and interventions did not emphasize the water components. I want to consider adding hydroponics to the site design.

Circle diagram: Our circle diagram was inaccurate and did not display its contribution to our design process.