This week, we have been working on our second proposal draft. The feedback we got on the first one was eye-opening. Our organization was terrible and we had a lot of extra words and sentences that we didn’t need. We cut out everything we could find that was not important and elaborated on our stronger points. As we worked, I tried to encourage others to participate and to keep our group’s ideas related to the overall theme of our project. After all of these weeks working together, we have become a much more efficient and effective team.
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