Hey EJ!
I really like your use of silhouettes to show how people would use your space in the elevation drawings. I’m going to push you to resubmit this with a bit more variation to the thickness of your lines, I think it will really help polish this drawing, it could also be as easy as removing some of the hidden lines from your isometrics. For line weights try pushing the outline of the isos, and try using different thicknesses to show depth on your plans, especially that stepped on on the right.
Best,
-Isaac
Hey EJ!
I really like your use of silhouettes to show how people would use your space in the elevation drawings. I’m going to push you to resubmit this with a bit more variation to the thickness of your lines, I think it will really help polish this drawing, it could also be as easy as removing some of the hidden lines from your isometrics. For line weights try pushing the outline of the isos, and try using different thicknesses to show depth on your plans, especially that stepped on on the right.
Best,
-Isaac