Hey Brady!
I think your layout is very clear and I like the variation you have in your different designs. The isometric drawings look okay, but seem to be rotated a bit as the left and right edges of the drawings tend to be perfectly upright. Let me know if I can point you to examples that might help. Also, now that you have your linework, I’m going to push you to resubmit this with a bit more variation to the thickness of your lines. Try pushing the outline of the isos, and try using different thicknesses to show depth on your plans.
Best,
-Isaac
Thank you for taking a look at this – I have reconfigured the isos, hopefully closer to your satisfaction! Definitely a lot easier to get into the second time.
Hey Brady!
I think your layout is very clear and I like the variation you have in your different designs. The isometric drawings look okay, but seem to be rotated a bit as the left and right edges of the drawings tend to be perfectly upright. Let me know if I can point you to examples that might help. Also, now that you have your linework, I’m going to push you to resubmit this with a bit more variation to the thickness of your lines. Try pushing the outline of the isos, and try using different thicknesses to show depth on your plans.
Best,
-Isaac
Hey Martinotti!
Thank you for taking a look at this – I have reconfigured the isos, hopefully closer to your satisfaction! Definitely a lot easier to get into the second time.
Regards,
-Bailey