speranza@uoregon.eduAugust 19, 2020 at 5:27 pm · Reply →
Intro slide: combine with second slide. say the problem. add the 2 paragraphs of the problem.
precedents: list the key changes? highlight ones you will take. Oxford circus
Seoul example: ditto. what did you learn. list.
Area: do your own drawing. start with Elk lines. show more area to locate the superilla.
concentration of tourism is a big problem they are trying to solve. i dont know how you can necessarily address it.
Mind Map: add icons. Is this your data collection indicators / qualities? looks like qualities.
page 12: make the data bigger and darker. you see that the most. do not darken the buildings grey. light line. add building lines.
say take-aways in bold.
Ladybug: great. what is the time?
page 15. you can zoom in even more!!! you have show this design for a whole street and then zoom in.
page 16: try to shade with trees!! pick some trees. Locust. Birch.
page 17: focus on a unit of design. one area in front of a building. zoom and design. its ok to use existing benches but also think about the ground material, trees, shrubs and grasses.
line-weights. you need to darken the wall of the buildings, tree trunks…anything you cut
page 18: good rendering. zoom in !!
bring to eye-level perspective
**City does not like London Plane tree. try another.
section: dimensions are good. work on line weights and line types.
lots of open space. call it flexible spaces. dining? or different. how do you say that.
Intro slide: combine with second slide. say the problem. add the 2 paragraphs of the problem.
precedents: list the key changes? highlight ones you will take. Oxford circus
Seoul example: ditto. what did you learn. list.
Area: do your own drawing. start with Elk lines. show more area to locate the superilla.
concentration of tourism is a big problem they are trying to solve. i dont know how you can necessarily address it.
Mind Map: add icons. Is this your data collection indicators / qualities? looks like qualities.
page 12: make the data bigger and darker. you see that the most. do not darken the buildings grey. light line. add building lines.
say take-aways in bold.
Ladybug: great. what is the time?
page 15. you can zoom in even more!!! you have show this design for a whole street and then zoom in.
page 16: try to shade with trees!! pick some trees. Locust. Birch.
page 17: focus on a unit of design. one area in front of a building. zoom and design. its ok to use existing benches but also think about the ground material, trees, shrubs and grasses.
line-weights. you need to darken the wall of the buildings, tree trunks…anything you cut
page 18: good rendering. zoom in !!
bring to eye-level perspective
**City does not like London Plane tree. try another.
section: dimensions are good. work on line weights and line types.
lots of open space. call it flexible spaces. dining? or different. how do you say that.
rendering: focus on unit and try rendering again.