Comments from reviewers:
1. Put the thesis statement at the beginning.
2. Use a color scheme to clarify the indicators throughout the video/diagrams.
3. Think about finding different music.
Comments from me:
1. Pause between diagrams to avoid information overload.
2. Use more vivid imagery of street view shots.
3. Relate everything back to the hypothesis more clearly.
Carina ChanNovember 25, 2020 at 12:40 am · Reply →
Comments from reviewers:
1) Be more specific in our keys and findings
2) Overlaying diagrams together, one by one, towards the end of the video to compile the findings so then there would be a story going on.
3) Have a comprehensive diagram from each category.
Comments from reviewers:
1. Put the thesis statement at the beginning.
2. Use a color scheme to clarify the indicators throughout the video/diagrams.
3. Think about finding different music.
Comments from me:
1. Pause between diagrams to avoid information overload.
2. Use more vivid imagery of street view shots.
3. Relate everything back to the hypothesis more clearly.
Comments from reviewers:
1) Be more specific in our keys and findings
2) Overlaying diagrams together, one by one, towards the end of the video to compile the findings so then there would be a story going on.
3) Have a comprehensive diagram from each category.