Hey Oscar! I really appreciate how cleanly and intentionally you’ve designed this particular assignment. The form is clear and the diagrams help show your thinking during the exploration. The top drawing might have been a bit clearer if line weights were changed based on distance / thickened at the edge of the object, but the lower rendered view helps this a lot. The typeface is pretty light and looks a bit odd with the kerning so high. Also I’ve mentioned this to a few students but ctrl+i is spellcheck in illustrator and might save you from those accidental ‘veiw’ instances. Going forward you really seem to have a good grasp on layout and I’d push you to continue this for future projects, but also to consider more complex forms. There is truly something nice about the simplicity of this, but I feel like you might enjoy getting to push these tools farther as we get into grasshopper.
Hey Oscar! I really appreciate how cleanly and intentionally you’ve designed this particular assignment. The form is clear and the diagrams help show your thinking during the exploration. The top drawing might have been a bit clearer if line weights were changed based on distance / thickened at the edge of the object, but the lower rendered view helps this a lot. The typeface is pretty light and looks a bit odd with the kerning so high. Also I’ve mentioned this to a few students but ctrl+i is spellcheck in illustrator and might save you from those accidental ‘veiw’ instances. Going forward you really seem to have a good grasp on layout and I’d push you to continue this for future projects, but also to consider more complex forms. There is truly something nice about the simplicity of this, but I feel like you might enjoy getting to push these tools farther as we get into grasshopper.