This is a nice presentation. I like the accent color you picked and how you incorporated that into your diagrams and drawing. I think the bench representation could have used a little more work and been shown more clearly with a rendering. Renderings are helpful for showing materiality, shadow, and scale which is something I think your drawing is lacking right now. That being said, I think the diagrams are really helpful in communicating the activities you envisioned for the bench but it is hard to see where exactly they would be happening within the bench. Overall a very nice presentation I would just think about how you want to represent the bench and focus more on that rather than the presentation style (even though it is very aesthetically pleasing)
This is a nice presentation. I like the accent color you picked and how you incorporated that into your diagrams and drawing. I think the bench representation could have used a little more work and been shown more clearly with a rendering. Renderings are helpful for showing materiality, shadow, and scale which is something I think your drawing is lacking right now. That being said, I think the diagrams are really helpful in communicating the activities you envisioned for the bench but it is hard to see where exactly they would be happening within the bench. Overall a very nice presentation I would just think about how you want to represent the bench and focus more on that rather than the presentation style (even though it is very aesthetically pleasing)