I think this is an interesting pattern and the deviations are very cool. Something I would have considered would be to use different colors to highlight the differentiations you made within the pattern because right now it is reading a little flat. If you used different shades of grey it might have helped the pattern have a little more depth and would have made for a more interesting composition overall. Don’t be afraid to take risks and try different things you wouldn’t normally try!
I think this is an interesting pattern and the deviations are very cool. Something I would have considered would be to use different colors to highlight the differentiations you made within the pattern because right now it is reading a little flat. If you used different shades of grey it might have helped the pattern have a little more depth and would have made for a more interesting composition overall. Don’t be afraid to take risks and try different things you wouldn’t normally try!