This is really creative and interesting. I like how you used cylinders and that moon shape, it gives the overall model a lot of character and looks really nice for the purpose of this project! I think the drawing could have been a little cleaner, the plans look very similar because of the hidden lines. You would want to make the cut lines a lot thicker than the lines hidden lines. The sections also could have been cleaned up more with a thicker cut line as well. Overall, a good start and I love how creative you were:)
This is really creative and interesting. I like how you used cylinders and that moon shape, it gives the overall model a lot of character and looks really nice for the purpose of this project! I think the drawing could have been a little cleaner, the plans look very similar because of the hidden lines. You would want to make the cut lines a lot thicker than the lines hidden lines. The sections also could have been cleaned up more with a thicker cut line as well. Overall, a good start and I love how creative you were:)