This a good starting point for diagramming. This is more architectural than the other diagrams in the class because of its form and composition so that is something to be proud of. Some things I would consider are to think a little more loosely and freely when creating your diagrams. These are diagrams that you would use for a studio project, but this assignment was geared towards creating abstract diagrams that would communicate how you interpreted the readings. This diagram did that but in a more formal way, which is fine, but for the purpose of this class let your imagination run wild (it will be more fun this way)! Also use pen for diagrams because it forces you to make mistakes and roll with them instead of just erasing (I know its hard to make mistakes but you’re still learning and thats what we are here for):) Overall, a good start and I look forward to seeing what you come up with for assignment 1.1B!
This a good starting point for diagramming. This is more architectural than the other diagrams in the class because of its form and composition so that is something to be proud of. Some things I would consider are to think a little more loosely and freely when creating your diagrams. These are diagrams that you would use for a studio project, but this assignment was geared towards creating abstract diagrams that would communicate how you interpreted the readings. This diagram did that but in a more formal way, which is fine, but for the purpose of this class let your imagination run wild (it will be more fun this way)! Also use pen for diagrams because it forces you to make mistakes and roll with them instead of just erasing (I know its hard to make mistakes but you’re still learning and thats what we are here for):) Overall, a good start and I look forward to seeing what you come up with for assignment 1.1B!